Monday, January 11, 2010

Firm Flood Maps Please Revise Edit Some New Words To Make It Flow Nicely Thank You For Revising My Pargrph Thank You Again?

Please revise edit some new words to make it flow nicely thank you for revising my pargrph thank you again? - firm flood maps

The rock is another word of Jesus Christ.
Christians build their houses, "The Rock" with a solid foundation. Building on the rock she holds from destruction by an earthquake, storms, floods, and to strengthen the foundations of rock on the ground. Therefore, the houses of people who will never be torn down in the rock.
Elsewhere, others build their houses in the sand ", which would be easily destroyed by the storm, rain or wind. For example, if you were a kid, he built a sand castle on the beach beautiful. They have done five hours long with devotion. But suddenly, the rain and could Sandburg dissolves in water to see. If not in Jesus, believe the a "sand castle", which is a home built on time. You must have a strong base, the rocks that support at home. If you are with Jesus, not to be depressed and I look forward every time. We must look before Jesus as "The Rock", which is a cornerstone of his life.

1 comment:

asking and answering said...

I write, go with her em. k to find the right words? . The construction of the rock will prevent them from not earthuake, Strorm, floods, rock destroyed in order to consolidate bases on its territory.

after a storm, instead of the storm.

by the way I think you have a great job on your essay. I just try to read his car and if you read it, give an A + would be.

good luck ^ _ ^

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